Life of the Gallows - IP

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I am officially sick and tired of editing this fucking story. See what happens when you get ambitious before you learn some skills?

As I lumbered to the BART station this morning, annoyed by the order of sentences is this rearranged and rearranged piece, I decided that it just needs severe bloodletting. The plan is to start reading it from the beginning, and every time a sentence gets in the way, excise it and put it in a Notes document. Then, if I hit a spot that needs something, I should be able to find it there, but more than likely I will be left with a cohesive story and a bunch of unnecessary lines in a document that I can purge.

That’s the plan. I’ve finished 5 other stories by the time it took me to get this far with this one.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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About halfway through yet another damn draft! The story that is never finished.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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Restructured and getting there, methinks.f

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Revision notes. This bitch has gotta be slimmed by about 3000 words.

Life of the Gallows - draft

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At last, a solid draft.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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More edits, more edits…getting closer to a new draft.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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Life of the Gallows - IP

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Almost a draft. Edited throughout, but need to print and read and hand-edit before calling it a draft. I’m positive I can cut it down to size, but it’s getting there.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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edits p31-38

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Edits p28-31.

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Edits to pages 28-29.

Life of the Gallows - IP

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Life of the Gallows - IP

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